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The questions
They sit in my mind
The answers
I cannot find
The struggle
To know what's mine
The feeling
You've left me far behind
The longing
Just to see your face
The missing
Of your sweet embrace
The fear
That it was all an illusion
The sadness
And the extreme confusion..

_Aibfinnia_
I honestly don't know why I wrote this. It just kinda happened...haha
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StevenForeman Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
The last line really ends this wonderful poem well. Extreme emotions, such as sadnes and grief, or even anger, are often followed by confusion, and you really captured that well. :D
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
then you should NEVER regret what made you upset that day
cause you made a great poem out of it ;)
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Aibfinnia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student Writer
thank you so much!!!!!!!
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
welcome ^_^
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GhaithXNite Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
this is amazing
a one can relate to this very deeply . . yet the rhythm is so beautiful
i love it
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Aibfinnia Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you so much!!
This one just kinda fell out of me. I was so upset../:
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